Structure
It is hard to give a definite structure for our short film. It uses a flashback within a linear plot line.
So we can apply Todorov's Theory of Classic Narrative to our story line:
- The normality, or Equilibrium, is the existing couple of James and Rachel. They have been in a long term relationship together and are happy with how things are.
- I believe the Disruption of this occurs at the point where she begins talking to and seeing another man aside from James, her current partner. In terms of the plot, the disruption occurs when we see the man collapse outside of his car.
- Confrontation - this is the part where Rachel finds out that the waiter (the man she has secretly been seeing) was the one behind her partners collapsing.
Restricted narration means that the characters and the audience are unaware of the events happening until it is revealed in the flashback.
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The waiter appears to think that the only way to be with her, is to go to extreme lengths of killing her current partner. Rachel however isn't expecting this and would have preferred to do it in a more civilized manor i.e. a normal break up.
Good start
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